Sunday, 6 October 2013

Cullen Bohannon. Blog Post Option 1

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Cullen Bohannon was a family man, with a wife and one child. He was raised fairly well with a wealthy family, soon inheriting his family's tobacco farm in Mississippi. As well with the slaves with it. Soon after the Civil War began, Bohannon then quickly took apart of the fight. But a year before the war, Bohannon set the slaves free with the convincing and morals of his wife. After the war, Bohannon came home to seeing his plantation destroyed, and wife and child dead from a platoon of union soldiers. Devastated and furious, Bohannon set on a mission to track down these men.While on his journey Bohannon took part of the building and construction the the Union Pacific Railroad, Hell on Wheels. After so much change in his life, Bohannon became a man of vengeance and strength and showed no mercy to anything, or anyone. Bohannon is a man not to be messed with, for your life could be the price to pay.

3 comments:

  1. Peer Critique: good word choice, and sentence structure, maybe a different font tho something easier to read luv ya girl

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  2. I like the fact that you included details on the characters previous life.
    I also like his beard.
    A few grammar mistakes, but not much.

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    1. Very well written. Gave excellent details, but there was a few grammar mistakes.

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